Another song of thunder sung, in the heavens high above
Far up in the sky, the storm rumbles the clouds up high
Yet there is a moment of silence, before the thunder sings its song
And the storm will shake, till it breaks heavens wake.
When the lightning shoots through the air, the lightning lights up the sky
The thunder comes after, and a echo of power
And the rain falls to Earth, hitting the ground like bombs from the sky
The Earth faces a siege, of natures anger and wrath.
The Storm calms down, the rains sounds start to fade
And the grey clouds disappear, floating through the heavens up high
And the storm has ended, it come and past
And now the storm, has finally passed.
Wow for an 11 year old not bad. but you were a bit repetetive with some words which got annoying fast. But I did like it. It kinda reminds me of one of mine "to stop the rain". kinda sorta. My favorite part of this was :
"Yet there is a moment of silence, before the thunder sings its song
And the storm will shake, till it breaks heavens wake."
WOW Nick O.O
I don't know what to say other then it was beautiful and I loved it! I love storms so much and I could really feel the power of the storm through the poem! O.O It was great =)
You never cease to amaze me with your work =)
Keep up the beautiful work Nick because you have a very bright future ahead of you ^.^