by Finalgravedigger   Apr 14, 2007

Tell me why you givin up,
why you givin in,
why you letting your sad sad feeling control you within

Why not learn,
why not move on,
do the best for yourself and live on.

Tell me why your commitin suicide,
why you throwing your life away.

And then let me ask why do you wanna cause more pain, why you lettin the people you love down in the drain.
Live life for yourself and someone else.

Tell me why everyone a hypocrite,
why they fake and why you just doin the same.

Why not be yourself,
why you sayin the ones that throw away their lives for their cause are fake. The ones WHO do what they believe is right ain't fake, they real.

Now don't give up on life, be stubborn inside and give life a FIGHT.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Kelly

    This is very good i like this alot....thanx for commenting my poem means alot to me xoxox

  • 11 years ago

    by shadowcat

    I like the line...
    "Live life for yourself and someone else."
    Its true, plus we need at least one person to get through life.
    And sucides does often leave many loved ones feeling guilty/ sad.

  • 11 years ago

    by SunDown Sky

    Heh.. u have talent.. lots of it.. again.. very good and "out of the patterns" structure
    what can i say, nice one indeed.

  • 11 years ago

    by sarenightmarexx

    I like this one. very strong and it has lots of meaning.

  • 11 years ago

    by Liz

    I thoughh this was pretty good