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by Nick who Plays Pool Apr 19, 2007
Dark, fantasy /
Everyday, a gust of wind blows
Across the land, as far as it may go
And as it blows, the wind erodes
Our planet away, till it finally decays.
A whirlwind, shall ravage the land
Tearing up the ground, and tossing up trees
Destroying the planet, as we see it be
Becoming nothing, but a wasteland.
As time carries on, we'll soon decline
The world will be, left behind
Everyday, shall be blown away
Until the day, the Earth is blown away.
I really wish i could have written so well when i was 12.
I read your profile after i read one of your poems, and i refuse to believe that you're 12.
You're not really. You can't be. You're too good.
Anyways, 5/5 - superb - yet again =)
keep it up
Wow.. I love it.. Great poem. 5/5!
by silence kills
Gahh :D i really like your style of writing, it's interesting 5/5 as always
by Beauty In The Breaking
Another great one Nick =) 5/5 like always =D
Keep up the great work and remember your care about ^.^
by Poetic Grunt
Good poem kinda reminds me of Final Fantasy V lol