Nothing But A Child

by Tricky Daze   Jun 2, 2007


Everything starts like a fairy tale;
With a craziness you submit yourself with lust.
You cannot think that time you are just,
Nothing but a child.

After a time hours wouldn't be enough;
You get eager to share all your times.
To be both like sometimes,
Nothing but a child.

But marriage wasn't just like it seems;
He always acted like he is the boss.
Then I thought the only solution was,
Nothing but a child.

Finally my son was born like a miracle;
So similar he was with his dad.
I didn't know that after wards I had,
Nothing but a child.

Just shocked when I learned a car killed him;
So tired for years I felt without him no pith.
He just left me all alone with,
Nothing but a child.

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Dedicated to all the mothers that gave their husbands to death
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  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Another perfect poem doll i think i shed a tear.5/5 write on!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow another wonderful sad poem and i liked how you used nothing but a child. My ex always called me a child.

  • 16 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    This is great. keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SeGrAdA

    Such a sad poem but i can feel hw true u were while writing it
    very gd
    i'll add u 2 my favorite
    keep writing u'r so talented
    nadine

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Very sad poem. I loved the repeition of "Nothing but a child". That was very effective and it kept me drawn into the poem. As for the topic, I think it's great that you dedicated this to mothers who lost their husbands. 5/5

    -Shannon <3