Soul mates

What a lovely piece, Ingrid.
The first stanza sets the tone of the poem - this was never going to be a miserable piece! "We are soul mates, you and I......" What a lovely and warm way to start a poem.

The next little stanza mixes passion and a need for a companion's comfort excellently, and now, as a reader, I am completely caught up in the love that is inherent in this piece and am now convinced it is a warm and inspirational poem. Some poems start one way, then sneak up on you and turn it all on its head!

"Love me forever....." The next two lines a pleading to be loved forever by this person that you obviously worship and couldn't bear to be without. The idea of losing a soul mate is unthinkable and that's what I think of when reading these lines - I know I couldn't bear it.

And then, the last stanza, the final, powerful passionate plea - almost desperate - "still need me and leave me never" - a baring of your soul and a complete acknowledgement of your love. Laying your cards on the table and showing your heart to someone like this could only be done with a soul mate.

A lovely, passionate little piece, Ingrid.
Take care,
Ben

This a beautiful poem out here...i liked the flow of it and the words...
keep writting sis

Ah the love and affection thru out this sweet poem was amazing!

the lines were basic yet the words have a real and true meaning.

5/5 David