I Am.

by End Of Eternity   Jul 2, 2007

I am thunder
With no sound
I am lightening
That never comes around
I am a storm
With no power
I am rain
Which never showers
I am a tear
Which never falls
I am blood
And I only crawl
I am life
With no breath
I am angel
Of my own death
I am master
Of your creation
I am sword
In the name of salvation
I am tide
Of your memories
I am your love
Release me please


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  • 10 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Hey Nitin

    this is a stunning piece of work. I think my favourite of yours!

    yep, it's great to be back on the site again!


  • 10 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is really good, I liked how you can get so much emotion into the whole piece even though it is so short and compact. As a suggestion, I'd say have the theme of 'love' work it's way into the piece earlier than the last line, because then the last part would be even more effective and have more of an impact. Still, this is a good write, well done :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    NicE poeM.
    VerY truE.
    EnjoyeD readinG iT.
    TakE carE...


  • 10 years ago

    by Mo

    I really liked this - flowed so well, very short and to the point (without being obvious and predictable). I liked it.

    Well written.


  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Beautiful words of a higher nature....

    for in which I am all and yet ...... nothing

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