"Cos she's found out about his cheating and lying"
[Cos she's found out he's cheating and lying]
- I guess your way sounds just fine, but the 'out, about' thing kind of threw me off. It's fine though, but I was just pointing out the connection there and how you could change it if you'd like to
I love this poem! It's catchy, cute, and at the same time very depressing and sad. I think it's something people can relate to, even if they're not drinkers. The emotional boundaries are set to please, that's for sure.
And, the way you've thought it out, cleverly, is quite nice. (:
Ok, i know im not supposed to, but i found it funny. Sorry if that offends you but i can just imagone a girl sitting on her kitchen floor singing tequilla loves me, sorry i guess it tickled my funny bone! Anyway it is an amazing poem all the same and every girl has dealt with a cheating scumbag by going through this at one point or another.