It's my own fault

by waiting 4 some1   Feb 27, 2008


It's my own fault
I let you in my life
It's my own fault
Believed in you as my wife
It's my own fault
Inside the fire I dive
It's my own fault
Experiencing death alive
It's my own fault
On the spikes I walk
It's my own fault
It hurts that I can't even talk!!!
It's my own fault
You are no longer here
It's my own fault
I lost you my dear
It's my own fault
I lost you twice
It's my own fault
So I am paying the price
It's my own fault
For ignoring my friends
It's my own fault
So I will make it end
It's my own fault
I shouldn't have said "Hi"
It's my own fault
That's why I am saying "goodbye"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    It's my own fault
    Experiencing death alive
    ^^^
    I love this part .... all to well do we know the times where experiencing pain makes us feel like the life as just been suck from our very being. Tearing at our souls to the point where our bodies feel lifeless.....

    You have expressed emotional sadness through-out the entire piece.
    I love how you wrote the poem as though in stages of your life .... with heartache and pain drizzling through your pen.

    Touching read, that so many can relate to
    Well done
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Great poem, and its your fault....lol.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany Michelle

    Wow what a wonderful poem...
    P3@c3

  • 16 years ago

    by Boobaz

    I love it... one of the best poems...

  • 16 years ago

    by KIM AKA DIMPLEZ

    Nice p0em its g0od

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