The Perfect Place for the most Imperfect Person.

by Teria   Mar 13, 2008


It's shallow depths that scrape your skin,
yet, not enough to harm you.
And, floating dreams of some odd sort;
the beauty in surrounding wind.

It's perfection in delightful ways -
sketching figures in such calm, cool waters.
And, no sounds can be heard,
but the movement against sparkling ice.

The sun sets - so delicious in it's own way,
like a burning fire over this wondrous glazed earth.
The darkness settles, but no fears seem to arise -
the perfect place for the most imperfect person.

- - -

And, I still feel here at home - inside and out,
the wonderful peace surrounding my being . . .
as if no problems belong to me, nor this earth;
. . . If only it were true, my perfect utopia.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brandon Lee

    I liked this poem, It was peaceful to me and places me in that knid of mind set. 5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I like how you said that the sun sets like a burnig fire. This is a really great poem! I love the feeling in it and the words you used.
    Keep it up!!

  • Wow, I absolutely loved this poem. It was absolutely wonderful. I've read a lot of life poems and this one of the best ones I've read. The feeling in it was great and the flow fit just right. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.