Why am i so angry

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 20, 2008


Why am i so angry
i know i shouldn't be
i just want satisfaction
look at what you have made me
i believed in you
how stupid of me
you hurt me so much
your not finished yet
your still making me cry
every single day
making me want to die
cos i cant believe your gone

saffie
14
19.2.05
11.47pm

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Edit:
    Wrong yours. It's you're.
    I should be capitalized

    Response:
    It wasn't bad. The rhyming was inconsistent along with capitalization. Other than that it wasn't horrible.

    Rating:
    Three.

  • 17 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Very true
    <3 it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sexual hysterias

    Amazing<3

  • 17 years ago

    by LiNa

    This one actually made me cry, because ive been angry for this exact reason.... so thatnk you for writting such a great poem short but sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by coverd in darkness

    Great poem, full fo emotion that many can relate to. :)

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