Trapt in emotions

by minh   Mar 31, 2008


I made this about two years ago, one of my first . Edited it a little, but it still has no name.

The water crashes over me,
pulling me down.
I cannot break free,
these emotions make me drown.

Watching the horizon dissapear,
There is nothing i can do.
This pain like a spear,
With no hopes to pull through.

I close my eyes,
as i try to escape.
Yet with all my efforts,
there was no air i could take.

I slowly sank to nothing,
just waiting for my depart.
As these weights are bounded,
to nothing but my heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sora

    WOW!!

    i loved every single line in this poem! it was amazing. and it was expressed so well. please, keep up the wonderful work! and keep those poems coming =]

  • 17 years ago

    by writeXlovexonxherXarms

    Love it.
    AMAZING work
    the words make a picture in my mind
    yeaaa good jobbb :]

  • 17 years ago

    by HvN

    Good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by HvN

    Good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I slowly sank to nothing,
    just waiting for my depart.
    As these weights are bounded,
    to nothing but my heart.

    Son,

    You make beautiful poems.....I really mean that!
    Keep writing, alright?

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

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