Write My Fate

by End Of Eternity   Apr 7, 2008


One more time i will try tonight
With shots of courage in my vein
To write my fate in burning light
To decide the end of this everlasting pain

One more chance i will take today
With a scared smile on my lonely face
Life will surely be so different someday
When my existence will be hard to trace

Like a tear i fall from my own eyes everyday
Like a star i shine in the shadow of night
Monsters are within me for the rest of days
To write my fate in this fading light

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  • 17 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    I loved the flow, how you have managed to pen down your thoughts so well!! god job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is amazing =]
    I loved your chioce of wording and the flow is excellent
    Your style of writting it's very captivating
    Your a brilliant writter ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Anything said to praise your writing is not enough.

    Soul touching!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    A very overwhelming poem,

    The tone was somber and fearful. Which made the poem rise very well.

    The last verse:

    Like a tear i fall from my own eyes everyday
    Like a star i shine in the shadow of night
    Monsters are within me for the rest of days
    To write my fate in this fading light
    ^^^^^^^^^^
    Very affecting and stirring

    Keep writing! [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by Jeni

    I like this a lot. It's very emotional.

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