Autumn(Haiku)

by Lonely Rider   Apr 17, 2008


Leaves float gently down
As the bare tree stands alone
Autumn has arrived

[** thanxxx to Hellon...Atlast I have composed my first Haiku **]

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  • 14 years ago

    by John Long

    I adore haiku's and this is as good as anything I've read. Particularly good for a first attempt, well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by anurag

    If this is yours first...i must say you are very talented...

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Excellent first Haiku you've penned here. You have painted a lovely picture within such few words.
    Beautifully done
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, greatly written for first haiku, so descriptive for such a short poem...
    I enjoyed in this, it is truly refreshing and vivid, the fact that you managed to create so colorful picture with just few words honestly amazed me.
    You somehow captured real spirit of haiku poetry here, bravo, truly well done!

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