Introspect - Etheree

An interesting read of life and the yearning of real beauty for the eyes. I also like your usage of words to describe a whole lot in just a few words especially "electronic bliss." Nicely written!

Slight
strip of
crescent moon

^ Strong imagery. The crescent part of the moon could be described as a strip.

smiling down at
idiosyncrasies of
life and artificial
glass lights illuminating
silicon villages,

^ The radiance of the crescent strip is rendered insignificant before the glow of artificial light. Yet it never is soothing to the soul, for the beauty and the calmness is absent. Plus the moon is supposed to be an abode of a spirit.

thinking
if the blindfolds of ebony clouds
more blinding or lust of electronic bliss.

^ Oh! I love how you've used "electronic bliss" The irony is marvelous.

Very well written.

I would have never known... haha