Palindrome - Untamed Words

by Lonely Rider   Sep 18, 2013

Dreams flickering over distant star-trail,
intertwined time, yours and mine,
stranded promises still
sometimes beckon sublime hope,
effervescence lost midst,
stubborn egos and
untamed words.

words untamed
and egos stubborn,
midst - lost effervescence,
hope sublime beckon sometimes
still - promises stranded,
mine and yours, time intertwined,
star-trail distant over flickering dreams.

Poetry Form - Palindrome
Palindrome Poetry Form - A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same forward or backward.


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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A palindrome...oh my...and what a beautifully written one. This is seamless and I just commend you.

  • 10 years ago

    by L

    The Palindrome form is one of the forms I find the hardest to write. This was nicely penned.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this form and I like how you have penned
    it to bring out the sadness. Its hard to make sense with the words been used backwards but you have done it well.

    Words that are not tamed eventually creates a hole in a relationship. Washing away all hope..nicely penned.

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