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by Lonely Rider Sep 18, 2013
Sadness, depression /
Dreams flickering over distant star-trail,
intertwined time, yours and mine,
stranded promises still
sometimes beckon sublime hope,
effervescence lost midst,
stubborn egos and
and egos stubborn,
midst - lost effervescence,
hope sublime beckon sometimes
still - promises stranded,
mine and yours, time intertwined,
star-trail distant over flickering dreams.
Poetry Form - Palindrome
Palindrome Poetry Form - A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same forward or backward.
A palindrome...oh my...and what a beautifully written one. This is seamless and I just commend you.
The Palindrome form is one of the forms I find the hardest to write. This was nicely penned.
by Meena Krish
I like this form and I like how you have penned
it to bring out the sadness. Its hard to make sense with the words been used backwards but you have done it well.
Words that are not tamed eventually creates a hole in a relationship. Washing away all hope..nicely penned.
by Mark Rawlins
by Gary R Priester