Night (Haiku)

by Lonely Rider   Apr 22, 2008


Moon watches over
in star studded firmament,
as night approaches.

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  • 16 years ago

    by anurag

    Great write... beautiful haiku..

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    I dont see a haiku format in poem yeah might wanna fix that yikes!!! :) 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautifully written, you are clearly very talented for this type of poetry, this is so elegant and descriptive piece, it is like a very vivid fragment of nature's beauty.
    Truly original choice of words for one Haiku too, overall truly creative and remarkable job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Wow I love moon, night, stars..

    N I luv this poem 2... Good
    Keep writing...

    Best wishz...

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Wow I love moon, night, stars..

    N I luv this poem 2... Good
    Keep writing...

    Best wishz...

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