My Music

by UnToLd TrUtH   May 6, 2008


My music is my words
Things I cant say and things
I wish could come true.
All my hopes flow
Through my pen and onto paper.
My words arent complicated.
My meanings are just.
If you just listened to the words,
You would understand
My form of music.

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  • 12 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    This poem, although short, is really really good. i liked it alot. keep writing your a very talented writer.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cayce

    It's short, but it definitely has potential. I love it when people write about music. Music is such a poetic and beautiful thing. I know you have a little bit a punctuation, but it needs more. Punctuation helps the poem flow better, because it lets the reader know where to pause. I think your descriptions could be a bit better too. They just seemed a little plain. This was pretty good, it just ould be better. ^.^ Hope this helps.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    This is a nice little write, you might want to edit it to take out all the "?" The flow wasn't bad, but wasn't great, Perhaps using some puncuation would help. I would like to have seen this piece a little bit longer than it was, since I started to read and then poof it's the end. Overall it was in my opinion just ok.

    Peace, Joe

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