Eternal Flame (Palindrome)

This is just beautiful, simply beautiful! Wish I can write more joyful poems like this one!

Wow, that was beautiful.

Sheesh! I love this poem. I can't ever write poems this style. They end up not making sense lol

I have a suggestion though:

Hearts entwined
eternally flame burning
intensely experienced moments
feelings transferred soul to soul
connection felt deeply
lasting forever
love

^^In the second line i would make flame plural to make it match both sides better like this:

Hearts entwined
eternally flame(s) burning
intensely experienced moments
feelings transferred soul to soul
connection felt deeply
lasting forever
love

^^ Then also read backwards it would be

moments experienced intensely
burning flames eternally :)

Just a suggestion of what i would do!
It's amazing anyways!

5/5

Great job on this form which can be rather difficult! Nice to see you try a new style!

Great job Ingrid on this reflective form of poetry...this is one i have no been able to master yet.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy