Flying Away

by eehcuhhhz   May 23, 2008


**Another Loveless interpretation. Below that is one of my favorite Loveless quote**

A lady stands in front of the bus
Eccentricity accenting her eyes.
With a flirtatious smile upon her lips,
The woman is a master of disguise.

An uneasy feeling rises within
Yet accepting this will not be the end.
For restraining unwanted emotions,
One must be deceitful to pretend.

With no method for second chances,
Entrapped within life's brutality.
Abandoning all that was given,
This woman faces reality.

To start anew, a dream everlasting
Yet awaiting its joyless new day.
One needs to feign its durability,
To forbid the spread of decay.

As the bus waits, the woman hikes its stairs;
Accepting her return will be far ahead.
When the time comes for the reappearance,
Her morality would not hang on a thread.

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Loveless Act (III)

My friend, do you fly away now?
To a world that abhors you and I?
All that awaits you is a somber morrow
No matter where the winds may blow

My friend, your desire
Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess

Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return

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  • 15 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Great poem, it's been so long since i last read a poem that comprises simplicity with an inspiring and emotional meaning..

  • 15 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    I was very intrigued from the very first line..
    and it continued throughout this very well crafted piece...i dwell more on the emotion i get from a poem more than trying to interpret the message, and i was truly moved by this...you're descriptions were so vivid that just for a second i thought i could see through the woman's eyes...
    so well done..
    john

  • 15 years ago

    by MR F R 3 S H

    It was amazing nice metaphors and imagery I lyked this one 5/5 good job ",

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderfully written... good imagery...starting the poem with the lady in front of the bus is really nice...
    and ending the next part with

    "Even if the morrow is barren of promises
    Nothing shall forestall my return "

    is amazing...

    very well written...

    good word choice..

    keep writing..