An Ode to Roadkill

Hmm.. not my cup of tea but i like your composition and idea,, though i feel bad for that poor little bunny he he he...

I liked it but i don't think the beginning and ending should have been the same. the poem wasnt long enough
very funny though and sooo random =]

My girlfriend ran over a rabbit, last week. i refer to her now as a murderer. pretty fresh and comical. heres to running it over if you must. seems to ask me for a deeper meaning. or word play. = run over to see the ran over. dont know how that makes you feel but.. its the idea that i got when reading it over and over.

Tom

Haha this made me laugh- rare sight
Here's to the little bunny
Who didn't get to the other side
-aww poor bunny
dont know how you came up with this topic but it was great
i give you a 5/5

ROFL @ this one ..
super sweet job !
"..Here's to the little bunny
Who didn't get to the other side.."

"..Here's to the smelly skunks
And them spraying that awful smell
Here's to smelling that nasty funk
And asking, "What the hell?.."

cracked me up everytime i read it ..
-sniff sniff- i smell talent.,,
;)

i like how you took a pretty topic as this to write an ode on .. it could actually be a very serious subject.. but its funny as hell.. which is what i really liked ..

Keep up the great work !!

~Wake~