The Brutality within

by Finalgravedigger   May 28, 2008

Surrounded by burning coldness and false hope
These feelings inside are ones that I cannot cope
Through this blizzard my beliefs crumble and fall
As I'm left on the snow barely able to crawl.

My face is implanted in everlasting numbness
Leaving my ideals to the engulfing darkness
Slowly anger and hate consume the void
As I become bitterly petrified and annoyed.

A beast that is brutality starts to emerge
As fangs, claws, and rage converge,
Eyes that are red spell insanity
This ghastly figure of mine many call profanity.

Now I'm transported to the land of red
Where confusion and chaos are bred
Back on 4 legs ready for vengeance
With this destructive soul let operation
revenge commence.


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  • 7 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Awesome Good Job! This sounds like something I would write! Check out my Brutality of Death and let me know what you think! Do you have a published book?
    Is this based on a real event or fiction?

  • 11 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Interesting.. really well written!

  • 11 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Ur poem is stunnin..the rythm,rhyme,words and expressions were all incredible...It was like a beautiful , sad image..u got a talent..good job, plz keep it up100/100..

  • 11 years ago

    by Brenda

    This poem reminded me of transformers. =)

    but aside from that random fact, it was a really good poem to read. you created outstanding images through your words. afterall, it made me think of a movie. great job! =)

    `` [Brenda]

  • 11 years ago

    by Alicia

    Wow! I really enjoyed this! Thank you