Love At First Sight (part 2)

by Goran Rahim   Jun 18, 2008


Today was the second day of our meeting
The second day of our class.
She changed her seat next to me
"here we will both pass"

All the time the class was fun
Smiling for each other
I was listening to her stories
Rather listening to the teacher.

When the class was ended
I walked her to her car
Everything was so fun
Everything was so right
This was the story of
Love at first sight.

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  • 14 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Arree wahh!! ssoo beautiful..i love the ending of the poem...it just tops the peom.

    :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany

    Hey not sure if you remeber me it's stylinsista07 aka Brittany i ahve not written anything for a while but i am back i am starting to write again I have missed it so much i am also looking in to publishing some of my new stuff. I think you were right when you said i would be a famous poet some day I am working on it. I love all of your poems.

    Britt

  • 15 years ago

    by Ash

    A well written poem. Simple and yet easily conveying your feelings.
    "When the class was ended
    I walked her to her car
    Everything was so fun
    Everything was so right
    This was the story of
    Love at first sight. "
    ^^Should the first line of this stanza rather be "When the class ended".

    But this is indeed a nice and sweet poem. Short but still filled with enough depth for the reader to be drawn into the world of "Love".
    5/5 from me!

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