Love Isn't Imaginary.

I love this poem! it was beatiful! This poem would b great for someone who thinks or wants to give up on love. I know it would have helped me a lot if it had been around during my period on loneliness. Besides that, this was a wonderful poem.

I loved the stanza: It is the one thing in life, that most people are lucky to comprehend,
whether they find it instantly, or slowly.

5/5! MMMWAH

Out of most of your poems i really liked this one...i love poems about love...and this one has a lot emotion and feeling to it...its real!!!
i had this same thing going inside of my head but i didn't know how to put it
and you just said it all for me really
keep up the good work
everything is going well it seems
5/5

U hav depicted sensible facts about love. Perhaps u cud work on the flow a lil bit. N plx correct those lil typos. Stil 4 the sound thoughts Ill giv a 5

Hmm... This wasn't the best poem I've read. I like the meaning behind it, that love is real, but the way it was expressed seemed sort of like a speach someone would give, and sadly, one that I would fall asleep to.

There is something that bugged me about this:

"Today - all around the world,
Everyone is trying to find love."

^^I saw this happened many times throughout the poem. This is one whole sentence, 2 lines, but ONE sentence, so the beginning of the second line should not be capitalized. You get what I'm saying? It's a continuation, not a new statement.

Overall, it was a good piece, but I've read better from you.
4/5
~Lace

I already did "Two Lovers" -- so I decided to do this one instead :)

I didn't quite like this piece as much. I felt like you were saying everything too straight up and you weren't showing, just telling. Often, that's the difference between a mediocre or good poem, and a great poem. As I read it, I saw it as more of a rough draft. It has potential to grow into a better piece, but for now, it's a four.

I do like the idea of the piece though. Though you also fit in the heartbreak of love, you keep a sort of ... serene kind of essence to the piece that kept it from becoming depressing, and that's hard to do sometimes.
..__MiNDYY