As long as i love you

by i want 2 live in a fairytale   Jul 11, 2008


Days pass by and life goes on,things change as well as people.i always heard about people changing and becoming others,and i thought i would never experience one.

i always heard people accussing others for being weak and easily influenced by life and its temptations,but fot the 1st time i just realise that they are much more stronger than any of us.

they changed,yes they did,they were that strong to save themselves and to never need anyone else.they changed in order to be independent and not to center their lives on others.how can we just blame them and make fun of them without staying one day in their shoes??!!!!

i never changed for you,i admit,but i really changed because of u,i wanted you to love the way i am,simply the way i see myself,i dont know if you ever bothered,but its true i refused to change for you and you always had many complaints about this.i actually did it on purpose,i refused being your shadow nor a smaller copy of a pic you would like to own.and now am strong enough to confess changing because of you,i changed in order not to be hurt by someone who would be a bit similar to you.

life still goes on,and i'll be stronger as long as i love you......

i would really like it if u guyz comment
and if there r any grammer or spelling mistakes plz correct me:)
i'll return the favour:)

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  • 9 years ago

    by Siham

    Speechless ...
    excellent job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    Alot of strong emotion in this piece, 5/5. Em

  • 10 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    Awesome..alot of emotion!

  • Very Good poem you need to get you structure together its all one big paragraph kind of confusing to read there were also a few grammar mistakes but overall very good write strong emotions keep up the good work! 5/5 Caleb

  • 11 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Good no great job. 5/5. amazing. ~KM~