Suicide From A Bridge

by Emilia   Jun 2, 2004


I know you don't like you life you've done everything, sacrifices
One day when you were walking on the sidewalk.
You rang to one of your "friends" no one answers no one wants to talk.

I know people call you words no one cares about you even if someone should.
Soon you heart will run out of time. You just need some love and some sunshine in you mind.

You walk over the bridge
you want to jump but you don't have the guts
You want to go out in the street and get hit by a car but you're too scared.

One day you know you will do it
And you don't have to live this life anymore
You don't have to be sad and lonely that´s for sure
you think that in you mind.

One day you took all you stuff home from school
No one but me know what you were going to do

You look down into the water, it looks cold
You knew you just have to let go
You can see the city lights from here, they are so clear at night

You had write a letter to your parents, you wrote to say it wasn't their fault that you were sad and lonely
You will miss them but you can't live this life anymore
You said quiet in you head, you just have to let go, just have to let go

Your fingers slips and your feet's goes along
When you touch the surface it's colder they you imagined
You catch your last breath and you slowly meets death

I could hear the ambulance
I ran out and scream what for?
I knew it was to late
I could have cared when you where alive
Not when you let go and die
At the funeral it was just me and you parents and your little sister that was seven,
When we where in the church they played "Tears In Heaven"

I know that everyone will remember you as a loser without any friends
But I will remember as the girl that had the strength to be different.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    hmmm....denna dikt var intressant men jättebra! ja tycke om den! ja bor i finland, men ja är finlandsvensk så ja talar finska och svenska hemma. Ja talar svenska med min pappa och med min mamma talar ja finska. 5/5 för dikten x)
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by CityGirl

    this poem was awesome... it really touched me! you're an awesome writer...keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Baby B

    That really sounds like a true story and i have tears in my eyes. So many people have to watch people commit suicide and it shouldnt be that way. Great poem. I loved it and it was really was touching. Read and comment on my poems please.

  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    The idea of death is quite hard to tackle succesfully in poems but you have done it very well. This is really good, it is quite raw and from the heart. It is also deep and shows a lot of thought and effort has gone into it. (please read and comment on my poems)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I'm glad you didn't really rhyme this poem. I don't think the topic would have been as rough and emotional if the lines rhymed. I don't really have any criticism, as the topic is from the heart and you can't ever go wrong when that is true.