Thunderheart

Beautifully written and the title is brilliant!
You have a way with words and this was so pleasent to read.

"Nocturnal incantations kiss tired thoughts
of detuned voices that confessed balefulness,
yet, I'll keep your spectral memories
wrapped in scent of ruby petals."

^My favorite part, the wording was great! Very heartfelt and filled with emotions....

"Monochrome butterflies carry hollow pleas:
repaint my obscurity, don't make me bleed."

^Beautiful words and perfect for the ending. Keep writing, always and forever.....

The last 2 lines are my favorite part of this write, they really stick with me when rereading and give me a great image in my head.

As always you have a masterful way with words that always make your writes an enjoyable read.

Woah. big words...lol. But wonderfully beautiful!

Amazing write as usual...
excellent word choice... wonderful use of words...
"Blossoming tears " - intersting term...
"flannel dreams" - love the meaning behind it..

"yet, I'll keep your spectral memories
wrapped in scent of ruby petals."

^^wonderful lines...

"Monochrome butterflies carry hollow pleas:
repaint my obscurity, don't make me bleed. "

^^ brilliant lines..

I really appreaciate your creativity... the way you express yourself is very unique...

keep writing...

Excellent once again Nile... N salso happy 2 c ur identity back on ur profile...

Keep it up..

too good n a wonderful write yet again...