Goodbye

Lost of deepth in this poem, beautifully writting, you have really expressed your self and im sorry you feel this way, at least you havent bottled it up

*****

Aww.... so sad, beautifully written.

I'll see you soon :}

What can i say about this poem:

geat expression of sad felelings inside
and i am glade you did not try to hide

i other i say the most thing in poem i adore
is rhyming and this is somthing you should work on it some more

:)

The rhyming was great... and your emotions are well expressed...
great poem, as usual...
Keep it up...
so sad, but great poem...