Every Day

by haileyy   Feb 25, 2009


She feels the same
as she stares in to shame
she wants people to understand
the pain she feels every day

she had something to clear her mind
but that just let her down each time
now it brings her pain
with tears every day

maybe the down is all she will feel
feel so lonely
so not real
with her numb she doesnt know how to feel

sitting so lonesome
no one to understand
this is all she feels
is this how it's planned ?

shes not alone
but its so hard to see
when tears fill her eyes
it seems like shes the only one who screams

i will tell you this
her life will not end
because everything will be okay
and her heart will finally mend.

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  • 15 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    I love the first stanza as it makes the reader - well it makes me - really think about what is going on in the bigger picture. It also makes the reader want to read on.

    I felt that the rhyming was not pushed, but it very effortless which makes it easier to read and understand.

    now it brings her pain
    with tears every day
    ^ I feel that these lines need to be changed to,
    Now it brings her tears,
    With pain every day.
    I'm not saying you have to do it, it's just a suggestion from my point of view.

    I also think you need to check your grammer on this poem - I know mine isn't great but it would make it easier to read.<-- that isn't meant to sound rude so I hope it doesn't.!
    Other wise a great read and I can't wait to read more from you! =]

    -Natalia.

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