Where is "the end"?

I can tell you that, we love and we are attached to this life because it give us soo much pain , and we hate death , becasue it releave us from them .

love is god way to make us understand how week we are ,
and make us understand , how much hurt he is in when we offend him and hurt him too !!

love is god punishment and blessing to mankind,!!

humanity's soul and cancer at the same time !!!
very well writem poem even it is a bit strange writen , but i like the spontanious writting make it close to the heart !!

greaat job

This is very nice i liked it... you seemed very out forward with you choice of words though, i might have put it differently but you are more unique i guess.

Well written.. some questions that most of us frequently ask ourselves.. questions to which we dont have any answers... good write...

one suggestion- write the words.. dont write shortcuts... the words weave a different beauty.. :)

keep writing...

Again i like reading this but write the words
out it just makes your poems look better
this poem made me think of how easy the wrong chioce is like dying is easy its the
living thats hard and so on. good stuff
keep writting

I like it :^) & i feel i can relate to it :D
i've always asked myself what's the purpose of being born & living :P guess we'll never know :P
nwayz great poem keep it up gurl !D