I need you tonight

by Ingrid   Sep 18, 2008


Baby, I am so cold
Spread your angel wings
and let me come inside
Sorry for being so bold,
but there are so many things
I can no longer hide

I need your body,
warm and strong
Feel you skin to skin
Hear the unchained melody
of our lovers song,
the divine overture of sin

Make love to me
all through the night
Fill me with all of you
Honey, don't you see
I am burning up inside
Do you feel the same way too?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Again a very nice warm and sensual poem, you come through with a lot of wanting and need in this poem, even a sense of longing?
    Well done

    Grant

  • 17 years ago

    by Mizuki

    I like this very muchs!
    Very goods!!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorinity

    Wonderful job! i love the abc rhyming pattern, not seen very much. great to see a poet go somewhere new :D cant wait to read more, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very good poem! : )
    i think so many people can relate to feeling that way and wondering if the person they feel that way towards shares that emotion
    great wording! : ) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Blueleo

    Very nice poems, very passionate. It was hot and spicy, yet tender and soft. My heart was lost between comfort and being turned on lol. An exciting read indeed.

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