Here I am

This poem is really good! i like your choice of words and how it rhymes... i like how you repeated the first line in every stanza, awesome! i love the last part, it really stood out to me! good job!

This poem is really good! i like your choice of words and how it rhymes... i like how you repeated the first line in every stanza, awesome! i love the last part, it really stood out to me! good job!

I noticed that first line is the same again, but its not laid out as parquette lol great heart felt poem, i kinda pictures a peson standing in a huge white box looking around confused

I didn't like this poem as much, until the end. It's good that you're looking for help though, good luck with that. I didn't find this poem very interesting to read, but you did have a good idea.

--Steph

Great poem i love the use of repetition of the first line. simple structure but effective could have been longer but that just proves i really liked it and wanted to hear more :P xxALLYxx