A gamblers demise

A fast paced read well chosen subject, very nice rhyme to the whole poem although the meter was slightly off, i felt that with such a short poem shortening the syllable count on some lines would improve it a bit.

Table is set
Place you bet
Roll the dice
Dont think twice
Push the limits
Think in digits
Blinded by greed
Feeding the need
Reach for the goal
Selling your soul
There's no surprise
Inevitable demise

your poem is very nice these few changes i think improve the meter slightly, just a suggestion

Grant

WOW!!!!!
I think this is the best poem anyone can read abt gambling!!!!!!! so true/right/simple
PERFECT!!
words perfectly chosen, perfectly written...
as the rest of ur poems i guess!!

keep it up, ingrid :)