No Love

by Steady Stereotype   Oct 5, 2008


Ever symbolic flying dove,
Soars the sky high above.
Finally time to remove the gloves,
To admit there is no love.

That the world truly is not fair,
No fairytale an evil lair,
No vibrant girl with silken hair,
No handsome prince at the end who cares.

No caring father bewitched and all,
No evil villain who will fall.
No high tower, alone and tall,
No caring voice from forest call.

No happy ending as told to you,
Disney lied it's what they do.
No happy dreams that will come true;
Yet everyone waits. And I do too.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well. I like the other poem better. But it was also alright...

    Anyway I can see that you've improved a lot (if you compare this poem with the other)

    Your writing skills have greatly improved. Keep up the good work.

    The reason I prefer the other poem is.
    You repeated the word "no" a lot. Though it might just be me. sorry.

    Anyway even though you repeated it a lot the flow went well. The lines were short so it has a lot of 'actions' in it.

    Keep writing. I look forward for your future poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cainer

    Very Nice. It was like i was sitting right there and you were reading it out loud to me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chocolate Addict

    Wow i really like this poem of yours.I like how you mix some of the false fairytales that we grow up believeing

    That the world truly is not fair,
    No fairytale an evil lair,
    No vibrant girl with silken hair,
    No handsome prince at the end who cares.

    ^^^ I think this stanza stood out for me ... I like the description on the 2nd and 3rd line. You have crafted this well

    Overall you have set a nice tone and also not forgetting you have a nice flow.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Nicely written...

    though we show we expect nothing from life.....secrelty we do....bold on the outside but cold on the inside........but if the good times dont stay.....then neither will the bad ones ^^,

    peace~

  • 16 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    Really Nice written.....

    i agree , there are no happy endings.... just fake smiles we end things with.......

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