Catch the rainbow ( Shadorma)

by Ingrid   Nov 20, 2008


Catch the rainbow ( Shadorma)

Hark, my love
Life waits for no one
Make your mark
Seize the day
Time will go on either way
Catch the rainbow now!

A shadorma is a non-rhyming verse of six lines with a strict syllable count of 3,5,3,3,7,5. There can be more than one verse as long as the syllable count remains the same.

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    An inspiring piece, Ingrid!!
    Well written and in such a short few lines lies a powerful message!
    Great work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful piece..

    Time will go on either way
    Catch the rainbow now!

    ^^very inspiring ...

    keep writing..

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    am inspirational write. One that offers adice in a punchy format. I like the thought of being able to catch a rainbow. Imagine that, eh?

    Well done

    Michael
    ((hugs))

  • 15 years ago

    by Krista

    I really liked this poem. I have never heard of this form before. And this, of course, was the winning poem!!! Congrats Ingrid!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very well written poem in a difficult form. Nice to read. Wonderful!

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