China girl ( Ottava Rima)

by Ingrid   Nov 26, 2008


China girl ( Ottava Rima)

Little gifts that she sends to me
Pictures of a proud young woman
two sweet little boys on her knee
Songs of lost love, not overdone
but graceful like a reverie
Poems of new hope, a rising sun
Humbled, thankful to God for you
Sweet China girl, I love you too

A dedication to my sweet girlfriend Lin from China.
So thankful for all she is willing to share with me.

~ Ottava Rima ~

A Ottava Rima is a poem written in 8-line octives. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in
the following rhyme:

one octive poem. abababcc
two octive poem. abababcc, dededeff
three octive poem. abababcc, dededeff, ghghghii

...so on and so on

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  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Awe this is such a sweet poem. The wording was great. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work. I gave this poem a 5/5