Leap of faith

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Nov 27, 2008


I don't walk through doors
From the widows I leap
I'm climbing up a rolling hill
And it feels far too steep

But there was a time when I thought
I had the keys to all the doors
Then I ended up on the ground
Crawling on all fours

But I'm sick of all the mazes
Drawing me back to where I started
Then I realized my hope
Had long since departed

Looking for the exit
All I find is a haunting wraith
The window is my only way out
It's time to take that leap of faith

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  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Oh wow. Amazing poem. I absolutely ADORE it! The rhyming is not forced at all, the story line is amazing. For such a short poem the story just envelopes you and makes you come up with pictures and stories of your own. Great job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    But there was a time when I thought
    I had the keys to all the doors
    Then I ended up on the ground
    Crawling on all fours

    Is my fav part very very good, sometimes we do think we have the answers or can get through it alone but end up makeing it worse and i feel thats what you said here. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Smooth and nice. I enjoyed the read.
    Keep it up Kevin

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda Jo

    Wow. Thats so good.
    Great job keep up the good work!

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