Learning to dance in the rain (Shadorma)

by Ingrid   Nov 27, 2008


Learning to dance in the rain (Shadorma)

Yesterday
Sun shone so brightly
Time passed by
Days turned dark
Learning to dance in the rain
Embracing myself

Written for a club contest.

A shadorma is a non-rhyming verse of six lines with a strict syllable count of 3,5,3,3,7,5. There can be more than one verse as long as the syllable count remains the same.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This form is new to me and looks interesting too. You have expressed yourself very well using this form..well done...take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by SADADDY

    This is a very nice write, thank you for sharing it with us.

    Sadaddy

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice write and good use of the form. Once again it only takes a few words sometimes to express your feelings or words. Good Job! 5/5

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