Half man Half empty

by mostafa   Dec 20, 2008


My head hurts ,My heart aches
i can't stop these thoughts from coming
too many bitter feelings i can't shake
i wonder how much more of this i can take

never thought emptiness could fill up so much space
hopes and dreams are all I'm surviving for all these days
numbness spread out of my heart to touch my frozen face
i feel like giving in but the sun keeps sending me warm rays

high on pain ,living in vain
rise and fall again and again
I've been in and out but I'm still insane
might have lost my head but the memory remains

i kept telling myself tomorrow will be better
that it would be the day i get myself together
promised myself I'd be a changed man by then
more hopes more dreams ,even my promise is empty

long ago i convinced myself that i don't need you
that all i needed was my friends and something to do
thought that it was enough to have both in plenty
but i never expected that I'd end up half man half empty

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mylah Malana

    ..such an amazing piece..i enjoyed reading it and i really can relate to it..

    good job!.keep it up..: )

  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow, this was such a beautiful piece that spoke to me in so many ways I could just feel the hurt and pain coming out of your words. Great imagery. Keep it up and thank you so much for your comment =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    What a wonderful piece.It was so amazing and really touching.We all feel depressed in some occasions in our life,but we can get our selves out of it by keeping our hopes and dreams because one day they shall come true.

    Excellent.5\5...

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Your poem was amazing, It was full of emotion. The rhyming was perfect and the flow was very smooth. I loved the ending.

    " never thought emptiness could fill up so much space
    hopes and dreams are all I'm surviving for all these days
    numbness spread out of my heart to touch my frozen face
    i feel like giving in but the sun keeps sending me warm rays "
    You really described what it feels like to be without the one that you love. 5/5

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