Cross Crescent Candle

by Faithless   Jan 1, 2009


Shadow from a window cast a cross
Crescent moon witness stars shoots across
Darkness pierced by seven lighted candles
Intertwine regardless of symbols

Crimson colors all the chaos
Battle rages as coin is toss
Righteous movement all out in force
Origins of divinity from the same source

Cascading tears innocence lost
Priceless gems pays heavy cost
Middle fence powerless to enforce
repetitious cycle or run from course

Moments freeze bird's melody pause
Ponder upon guilt heart felt remorse
sweat wasted on unworthy tension
Seeds scattered motionless flatten

Bloodshed in the name of heaven
Confusion over faith's sermon
Ponds and rivers became stagnant
As mortals awaits their judgement

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Interesting poem. Joe reccomended it to me because I was questioning my religion.

    Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    I love your rhyming in this one. It flows really well.
    Great job. :) And thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This one is sad but really good. u need to cheer up!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Not Enough

    I love it! Wow... It's AMAZING! Seriously, it left me speechless. It's so powerful and has great emotion!!! I love it!!!! Excellent job!! I can't unerstand why you have 4.9 rating for this poem.
    5/5

    Soda.

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    Hello ! I've gotta say ! it is the most amazing ending i've ever seen ! the way you've written the poem and the way you moved from issue to another is perfectly amazing! Keep it up! you'll be a great poet 1 day!... 5/5 !

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