Letting Go.

I liked this poem. I adore poems that are pulled off nicely without using rhyme or what seems to be syllable counts (this doesn't seem, not quite sure though).

It's a truthful poem that comes from the heart. A lot of times that's all it takes to make a beauty, but this time you've pulled it off w/more than just heartfelt/emotion words.

Kudos.

I really liked this poem. I know exactly what you're going through because I am going through the exact same thing right now. It's so difficult. Great job!!

This really delivers the heartfelt emotion of frienship i would not change a thing

Temps,

One of your previous poems was about this friend too and he told you that you will always have his friendship. He is a man of his word, our TJ and I know him well enough to know he will never let you fall.
Sometimes a relationship does not work out like we want it to and it hurts so deeply.
I think you have to take your time to let this wound heal and then you will be able to accept his offer of friendship.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Tempsy, let me start with the title : letting go. ...

once , an old chinese wise man told me and i stil hold it in my heart .. in china they say yesterday is history , tomrow is yet to be writen , and today is a GIFT , that is why it is called PRESENT .

sometimes we live in the past , and forget about today . torturing your self like this , is not going to make things straight or make the clock turn back ..

you refered your self as SHE in your poem , who is she?
you or somone you lost in your past ? your words jsut enter the sadenss to my heart, that girl that have such a tender heart and smile .. where is SHE now? .. still see her in your miror?..

the world is a very cold place tempsy , and he miss your warm smile..

you wanted one more chance.. to be his friend.. and you did not ask for yourself but to confort him , .. how can somone give soo much? you need to have somethings to give it tempsy , you need to have happiness soo you can offer it .. it wil end up by giving from yourself soo much , that tempsy wont be anymore , even for him ..

wet cheeks ? i tell you something YOU CAN NOT CRY LOUD ENOUGH SO HIS HEART CAN HEAR YOU ANYMORE .. there voice on a difrent frequency now that his heart can not hear ..

it si not true that you can not live without him. life dont wait for anyone . it will be painfull yes , and empty yes but it will go onn.. and on... give your scars time to heal , and form .. soo in the future you will look and remember . and read on your heart wall , what battle was held here..

at last , i tell you we all miss tempsy , and miss her smile and her happy dance and happy face .. and we all wonder when tempsy will be back .. we all await her
CJ