All I need is you ( Shadorma)

by Ingrid   Feb 21, 2009


All I need is you ( Shadorma)

Eyes closed
Your sweet face appears
All I need
is your love
Breathing in, desire mounts
Heart beats just for you

Written for a contest, based on this quote:
"At this moment there are six billion, five hundred and two million, eight hundred and sixty seven thousand, one hundred and twenty people in the world, give or take a few and sometimes all you need is one. For better or for worse."

A shadorma is a non-rhyming verse of six lines with a strict syllable count of 3,5,3,3,7,5. There can be more than one verse as long as the syllable count remains the same.
I got this idea from my friend Silvia: http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1098332

Thank you kindly Miss Take for helping me improve my verse:)

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    You never cease to impress me, you're consistent. Your words speak a thousand meanings, your poems are beacons of light among lightbulbs.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A short but to the point poem. Understandable and I think many people could relate to this. Another form written with perfection.

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A beautiful form you have written this piece in, you did such an amazing job, this whole poem touched me deeply and emotions were just pouring out. Nicely done, 5/5 from me. Take care and God Bless!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Another good love poem. True love, is "all I need is you." Your words fit the quote. Good job, hope you win. 5/5

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