How Long Is Forever

'Powerful' seems like the right word for this one. Beautifully expressed.

all the best and take care

Your poem is great and I like reading it. Great choice of band too, 5/5.

A crushed, shattered heart,
dost not discriminate.
No more, no less anguish,
'tis the ultimate price
we bear for love.

These lines are powerful. It says it all and
because of love we bear everything. I like the
language you used..excellent write.

Loved the Old English in this piece. Wonderful !

Youthful or aged,
a crushed, shattered heart,
dost not discriminate.
No more, no less anguish,
'tis the ultimate price
we bear for love.
^^^
Loved this part and the wording is perfect.

A wonderful masterpiece created from a quote ... excellent read, wonderfully penned

Sylvia,
So much truth to the feelings portrayed here. Reminds me of my divorce and how I didn't want to get one for the pure and simple fact that I thought forever was forever. Needless to say somethings are better left than done. Anyways, a beautiful poem you have woven and I sincerely adore the "how long is forever gonna last" theme of it all. Loved the emotions in the poem. Great Job.
Take Care,
Kay