Blind

by Emilia   Jun 13, 2004


I wish you were mine
How could I've been so blind
You were standing right in front of me
And I just let it be

Now it's to late and the tears keeps falling down
I didn't know but I was
in love with someone

I needed a break and now it's to late
You leaved home
I miss you so much more now when
you're gone

Because I love you so much why can't you see
That I really need you here with me!

*true love will never die*

Please comment and rate on my poems, It mean a lot to me

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  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    awww.swet poem...very touching...5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by insane authority

    it a good poem very strong on the
    emotion!!

    keep it up :)

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    The theme was right on
    The mesage was right on
    The emotions were present
    The message was clear
    The rhyme was off a little
    The rhythm was off a little, some lines way longer than the others.

    But over all it was a nice poem.
    Good luck.

    -David

  • 19 years ago

    by Outlaw Central

    Good poem
    True love is also normally the most painful at times

    I like this it was a good flowing poem that kept on the story

    Hope you can visit my poems and comment too some are along the same lines

    Take care
    XocX