Rebirth

I really like this the way you set it up and the words you used you can get a real sense of where your coming from in this piece. Good Job n hang in there.

Wow, this was amazing, i loved the flow and imagery. excellent poem 5/5

Living in a delusional world
Protest to live in reality
I found nirvana within me
As I meditate in tranquility

A very good start to a excellent poem. Though it's my favorite only the tip of what is to come in the rest of the poem
Enjoyable read

I thought this poem was just amazing. It captured my attention from start to finish... A brilliant write.

Such a good poem Azzza :)

"I'm drunk when I'm sober
Life begins when it's over"
^Actually I discussed this with my sister and she was like: it should be "I'm sober when I'm drunk" but I myself still see this one good, removing fillers gives several choices.
My fave lines..well done Azzza.

Your rhyme someone misguided me..sometimes you rhymed the stanza, and sometimes you didn't..though your rhyme is often good. So I don't mind this.

Great write!
Write on