Random Things (Multiple Brevettes)

by Sylvia   Jun 1, 2009


Sun
r i s e s
beauty

sadness
c o n s u m e s
happiness

love
e n d s
hate

hatred
b r e e d s
contempt

depression
d e v a s t a t e s
psyches

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The Brevette, created by Emily Romano consists of a subject (noun), verb, and object (noun), in this exact order. The verb should show an ongoing action. This is done by spacing out the letters in the verb. There are only three words in the poem, giving it the title Brevette.

snail
l e a k s
slime

Each of the three words may have any number of syllables, but it is desirable that the poem have balance in the choice of these words. Unlike haiku, there are no other rules to follow.

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  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    Stunning and beautifully penned.Very realistic as we all feel a bit of every word you penned here my friend.
    Another enjoyable read.Keep up the great work.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Dang this was sure an impressive write, what a interesting form, couldnt have said this any better than myself, everything was soo true. My favorite two sets were..
    Sun
    rises
    beauty

    and

    sadness
    consumes
    happiness

    Loved your word choice with consumes to describe how it eats away the happiness. So very true!

    5/5.

    Temps! (Beyond a Poets Mind)

    Keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Ohh sylvia you seem to be a master of forms... loved this one... short and sweet...
    will try it...

    //sadness
    c o n s u m e s
    happiness// so true :)

    wonderful write...

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Sylvia,
    What can I say to someone who knows so many forms and always amazes me with more. I absolutely adored this poem and think you done well with it. The forms are always the toughest for me and you manage to do them with ease. Great write dear. Take Care, Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An interesting form and I also like what you
    have written. The right choice of words make
    the images to come alive..nicely done!

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