Witness

by Beautiful Forever   Jun 10, 2009


Sophisticated - a brilliant smile,
Smooth, quick, incomparable style,
So many friends - so many fears,
Only ghosts see transparent tears,

Always on top - playing the game,
Each new trick - never the same,
Another warm impression to save,
Failed attempts - digging a grave,

Warm embraces continue to grow,
The purest love one could ever know,
Breathing has become a foreign task,
Help - is increasingly harder to ask,

Isolation sets in - it's over now,
Your fragile mind has broken somehow,
All this time wasted - denying,
When all along - I watched you dying...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was a very well-written piece, the flow and rhyming were right on target and in my mind, never were off. I really enjoyed all the imagery and descriptions you fully explained, this was a unique write! Your word choice made this poem alive to me and explained so much, great work! 5/5 from me, a brilliant write. Take care and keep it up!

    ~MaryAnne