Battle Of The Loveless

by Lady Nik   Jun 15, 2009


One minute it's love
And suddenly it's like a battlefield.
No more terms of endearment
Or soft soothing kisses.
I'm surrounded by bullets and bombs
Fighting love, my nemesis.

One minute it's us
And suddenly it's like I'm stranded.
No help with protection
Just me, myself and insanity
Wishing these weapons would work
Then maybe you'd understand me.

One minute it's bright
And suddenly it's like a black hole
No more days together
Or nights nestled in your arms
I'm surrounded by blood and bones
Body count, sound the alarms.

One minute it's heaven
And suddenly it's like I'm damned
No help with salvation
Just me, the lost and the dead
Wishing these wounds would well
Then maybe I wouldn't feel so much dread.

*For a club Contest. I had to write about and use the lyric (One minute it's love,And suddenly it's like a battlefield.)*

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  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    I love the creative repetition you used for the first two lines of each stanza. Your poem showed great flow as well as an interesting topic. A healthy mix of straight foreward thoughts and slight metaphors, this was a well written piece. Well Done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    This is a great poem great job nik it had awesome words an d it painted a great picture

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is great. I like music poems and reading this one i can say you're a talented music writer. I like the feeling it gives. I've not only read the words but sing it also. Very well done 5/5, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I like this poem alot!!!
    it kinda reminds me of when me an my bf fight, lol.

    you truly have a gift,
    and this poem flowed well and i enjoyed reading it

    -->Jess<--

  • 14 years ago

    by guy named Guy

    This is a very well thoughout poem.. i loved reading it.. just the way to read it makes it seem so alive.. 5/5..

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