Edge of Dreams (Collab)

by Sylvia   Jun 23, 2009


Laying under a generous mulberry tree
watching the breeze caress each leaf.
Gracefully swaying, performing a silent ballet as
separate entities move with the precision of one.
Swaddled in natures arms transcending,
as if carried by God's own hand.
Balancing on the edge of dreams,
my thoughts drift to you.

Joined only by the air surrounding us,
unable to touch, your presence is felt,
here by my side, 'neath the mulberry tree
Caressing, teasing my every thought,
a sense of peace embraces my soul.
Eyes closed, inhaling the sweet scent of fragrant flowers,
reminders of you with each breath taken.
Obscuring the agony of being alone,
praying this day will never end.

(Collab with a very good friend, TJ Becker)
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=365852

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  • 14 years ago

    by lonelyrider

    Nice poem, you have a great mind.. i ,love it...

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I thought this was beautiful a lot of imagination and feelings touching each of the senses. An extremely well written poem that will be added to my favorites

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Sylvia,
    I love this poem! The flow is great and the imagery is appealing. It's more than 5! Congratulations!

  • 14 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Very well written by the both of you, this poem had a soft and gentle feel to it, as if written in quiet pleasure.
    Well done it was an enjoyable read

    Grant

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is nicely written where feelings flow
    together as one..good write!

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