This Love...(Huitain)

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 12, 2009


This Love... (Huitain)

I am lost to love's allurement,
Now our bodie's are intertwined.
Knowing the deepest fulfilment...
Now in this heart and soul of mine.
A love like our's is hard to find...
It steals each fibre that I owe.
My heart to you it truely binds,
Sacred, devine, this love I know.

(Written for a club challenge)

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Love should always be sacred and divine. Another amazing write. It seems as though you have a lot of love in your heart for someone. Very beautiful :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    That is the feeling of pleasure as well as
    happiness when the power of true love draws
    you towards them...well done with the form!

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I really enjoy the simple and tender way you write love poems. Uncomplicated just beautiful. You did a great job on this challenge.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I agree with Cindy, it is beautiful. A wonderful expression of the love you feel for someone special. Good job with the form.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    you did a wonderful job with this challenge. Your poem is beautiful :)
    ((Hugs))
    Cindy

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