Suspended Past. [Collab]

by Courageous Dreamer   Nov 5, 2009


Chocolate covered walls stare
as the clock hums it's daily melody;
filling the voiceless atmosphere with
soft whimpers and my own rhapsody.

Hours whisper secrets and poems,
as dreams slip through my fingers,
hiding hopes and doubts in my pockets,
full of scars that do seem to linger.

Time flows as I am stuck in this black
and white photo fading slowly on the shelf,
my only one witness and alibi of the past,
when I hadn't yet devoured myself.

Destroyed identity now crumbling
to misery coated charcoal black.
The past suspended dangling,
ready for another bloody attack.

Collab with Chiara B [Karla].

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow! What a powerhouse collab this was. You two should be very proud because this was brillant. I love the first stanza. You two did a great job with this. It seems so whole and flows very nicely. Nik :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice, you two did a wonderful job on this collab. Really cannot tell who wrote what. If we could only suspend the past and live for the present and future. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Awesome... just awesome you too! Beautiful flow, rhyme in this piece and words that just create vivid images :) Loved it! Very well done to you both :)) Lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very well written and I could see a framed
    picture hanging on the wall which speak
    voulmes..good write!

  • 14 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Wow. pure amazing

    lovely write!

    definetly a tru master piece

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